I tasted what I thought was nice,
'Flavorful' to suffice;
I saw the Creamy Saucy Dish:
Looking back at me to relish!
I touched the rather neat looking cake,
A peice of which I'd rather not take:
I only saw from afar-
Something I'd rather keep in a jar!
But I promised myself that I would have-
Something special that I might like,
Something that isnt too sweet:
Coz my sugar levels might actually spike!
So again I tasted what I thought was nice,
'Flavorful' to suffice;
I took the Creamy Saucy Dish:
Looking back at me to relish,
and upon touching the rather neat looking cake,
A peice of which I would never otherwise take:
I didnt only see from afar-
Something I'd rather keep in a jar!
And finished it...
Because even though its not my Birthday,
I deserve Cake...
even though Nothing is at stake.
About the Creator
Sarah D
Short Stories/Poetry that will make you THINK a little bit about ~Life~ and Warm your heart! It's fictional content, but nice things usually brighten up the day! I want to BLESS others with what I write and be remembered for it too! Adieus
Reader insights
Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
Top insight
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Comments (4)
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Nice work! Love it!
Splendid!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕
Nice and the picture is simply irresistible😁🧁📝♥️