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A Distant Dream

That feeling you have after a worst fear was realized and you've become accustomed to your new normal.

By Donna Fox (HKB)Published about a year ago โ€ข Updated about a year ago โ€ข 1 min read
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A Distant Dream
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Its been a month

Since she left us

Since her pain was relieved

Since we've accepted our new normal

It doesn't feel the same

It doesn't feel right

It doesn't feel real

I still hear her paws on the floor

I still see her waiting to greet me when I get home

I still miss her

It feels like a distant dream

It feels like she's been gone forever

It feels like it only happened yesterday

Time is fluid

Time is irrelevant

Time is what came calling for her...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

It was her time and I wasn't ready, I'm still not ready. I didn't know it would be this hard with you, Belle.

We miss you everyday!

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Donna Fox (HKB)

Thank you for stopping by!! ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿฉต

If you are interested in longer works by me, I have two books published on Amazon.

Jogger's Trail and Fox in The Hole.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran11 months ago

    I'm so sorry for your loss ๐Ÿฅบ I lost my cat one and a half years ago due to his illness. This poem hit home. It's exactly how I feel. I wasn't ready at all. Love this poem!

  • I love my pets and I loved this poem. Great writing

  • Manikanda Ramanabout a year ago

    Nice

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  • Ammu about a year ago

    heartfelt one.. loved it

  • Harmony Kentabout a year ago

    Heartfelt and moving, Donna ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ™‚

  • Vairamani Sabout a year ago

    Wow!

  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    The new challenge is a great opportunity to tell Belle how you feel. Talk about the good times, the not so good times, laughter, pain. Heartfelt stories are the best ones. Gives u a chance to get closure by bidding goodbye in the end. u should try it. Belle wants you to be happy and move on, She is in happy place. Remember the good times.

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  • Furkan Ceylanabout a year ago

    Great!

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