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The Jackal's Vengeance

The Horror of Pine Creek Revisited - Part II

By Vivekananthan VellaichamyPublished about a year ago 3 min read
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The Jackal - Part II

Read Part I: The Jackal - Serial killer of Pine Creek

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Years passed and The Jackal was all but forgotten, a distant memory from a dark time in Pine Creek's history.

However, one summer night, strange things began to happen. People reported hearing a howl in the night, and soon after, bodies started turning up, all bearing the signature calling card of The Jackal.

Detective Brown, now retired, was living in a nearby town and heard the news of the killings. She was drawn back to Pine Creek, unable to ignore the pull of the case that had haunted her for so long.

Upon her return, she was met with resistance from the current police force. They didn't believe that The Jackal could have returned, and they didn't want the assistance of a retired detective.

But Detective Brown was determined, and she began her own investigation, using her knowledge and experience to try and track down the killer.

As she dug deeper, she discovered that the killings bore a striking resemblance to the work of The Jackal. The calling card, the MO, it was all too familiar. But there was one key difference - the victimology.

The previous victims of The Jackal had all been young women, but this time, the victims were from all walks of life, men and women of all ages.

Detective Brown was determined to find out who was behind these killings, and she went to the one place she felt she would get answers - the old abandoned house where she had faced The Jackal all those years ago.

As she entered the dark and musty interior, she was filled with a sense of dread. The hairs on the back of her neck stood up as she heard a sound that made her blood run cold - the sound of someone laughing.

And then, she heard the howl.

She slowly made her way up the stairs, her heart pounding in her chest. And there, in the dim light, she saw him.

The Jackal. He was exactly as she remembered him, tall and lanky with a sickly pale complexion and wild eyes.

He was holding a knife and a human heart, just as he had all those years ago.

But as she looked closer, she realized that something was different. The Jackal was wearing a mask, a mask that disguised his face.

And as he lifted the mask, she saw the face of someone she knew - the town sheriff who had shot The Jackal all those years ago.

The sheriff lunged at Detective Brown, but she was quick and shot him, bringing an end to the reign of terror once and for all. As she sat in the dark, empty house, she realized that the truth about The Jackal had been in front of her all along.

He had never truly died, and he had been biding his time, waiting for the right moment to strike again.

And so, Detective Brown finally found closure in the case that had haunted her for so many years. The truth about The Jackal had finally been revealed, and the residents of Pine Creek could sleep peacefully once more.

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The Jackal : Serial killer of Pine Creek - Part I

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About the Creator

Vivekananthan Vellaichamy

Writing is my passion. I love writing stories about scary things and health related articles. And I love writing movies reviews about ghost and serial killer movies.

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