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The Jackal

Serial killer of Pine Creek - Part I

By Vivekananthan VellaichamyPublished about a year ago 3 min read
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It was a dark, moonless night in the small town of Pine Creek. The streets were empty and the only sound that could be heard was the whistling of the wind.

The residents of Pine Creek were afraid, as they had heard rumors of a serial killer who was on the loose. They called him The Jackal, due to the fact that he always left behind a calling card in the form of a jackal's howl.

Detective Samantha Brown was the lead investigator on the case. She had never faced a serial killer before and she was determined to catch him. She spent countless hours going through the evidence and interviewing the residents of Pine Creek, but she still had no leads.

One night, while on patrol, she heard a blood-curdling howl. She followed the sound and found herself standing in front of an old, abandoned house.

The front door was slightly ajar and she could hear footsteps coming from inside. She cautiously entered the house, her gun drawn.

As she made her way through the dark, musty interior, she suddenly heard a sound that made her blood run cold. It was the sound of someone laughing, and it was coming from upstairs.

She slowly climbed the stairs, her heart pounding in her chest. When she reached the top of the stairs, she found herself face to face with The Jackal.

He was a tall, lanky man with a sickly pale complexion. His eyes were wild and his mouth was twisted into a cruel smile. He was holding a knife in one hand and a human heart in the other.

Detective Brown aimed her gun at him and told him to drop the knife. But The Jackal just laughed and lunged at her.

The two of them struggled, with Detective Brown trying to keep him at bay. But The Jackal was too strong for her, and he overpowered her. Just as he was about to strike, a shot rang out and The Jackal fell to the ground, dead.

Detective Brown turned around to see that it was the town sheriff who had shot him.

As they were walking down the stairs, Detective Brown asked the sheriff how he had known where to find her. He told her that he had received a tip from an informant who had told him that The Jackal was hiding out in the abandoned house.

Detective Brown was shocked and asked the sheriff who the informant was. The sheriff just smiled and told her that it was better that she didn't know.

Days turned into weeks and weeks turned into months. Detective Brown continued to work on the case, but she was never able to find out the identity of the informant.

The mystery of The Jackal's identity remained a secret, and the residents of Pine Creek were left to wonder who he really was and why he had come to their town.

Years later, Detective Brown retired from the police force and moved away from Pine Creek.

She never forgot about The Jackal, and she often wondered if she would ever find out the truth about the mysterious informant who had helped bring him to justice.

But the truth was, the informant was The Jackal himself. He had taken on a new identity and had been living among the residents of Pine Creek all along, watching and waiting for the perfect moment to strike again.

And when the time was right, he would once again unleash his evil upon the world, leaving a trail of terror and death in his wake.

Part II - The Jackal's Vengeance: The Horror of Pine Creek Revisited will continue.....

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About the Creator

Vivekananthan Vellaichamy

Writing is my passion. I love writing stories about scary things and health related articles. And I love writing movies reviews about ghost and serial killer movies.

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  • The Invisible Writerabout a year ago

    Great twist. Look forward to reading part two!

  • Whoaaa! I did not expect that ending at all! Fantastic story! I've hearted and subscribed to you!

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