The Little Tree
31st March, Story #91/366
I remember when our love was young and strong, when our lives together unwound out in front of us. A vibrant braided ribbon. From that angle, it looked to unwind forever. We were full of hope, then. Ideals. Passion.
We bought a house. Empty of Things, but filled with potential. Choosing Things together was a chore. It felt alien to visit the garden centre, like actual grown-ups, and buy houseplants (which we promptly killed with our inexperience and busy-ness). But we have Arrived! I thought, when we purchased the tree for our driveway.
It was a cherry blossom tree. Looked a little dull, to be honest, hardly more than a tall stick when we planted it. But the picture attached to it promised lush splendour.
That first year was hard. Were a partner to behave now the way we did then, in our worst moments, bags might be packed, locks changed. Youth often thrives on drama, yet lacks a spine. There's an evil satisfaction to the great empty gesture of Storming Out. Slamming a door. Marching down the road, fueled by anger and hurt. The follow, the pleading, the stumble, the fall... the snap.
I was disproportionately upset the little tree was ruined, would surely die, before it had a chance to flourish and establish itself.
The little tree did not die. We mended it. Found alignment, made sure the pieces bonded properly. Gave it a chance.
It lived. Grew. Stronger than I believed possible.
Now, we're surrounded by the clutter of lives lived. Potential has dwindled away, but look: every year, in March, the tree is gowned in the softest, most brilliant white. Better, even, than the picture promised. As April moves into May she sheds her beautiful raiment with no shame or regret whatsoever. In Spring the little house draws every eye. Then, for a short while, our little slice of the world is carpeted with silky warm snow.
I see brilliant blue between those branches. We squeeze hands. Content within earshot of grandchildren hunting for chocolate eggs, I think: I'm so glad our little tree didn't die.
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Word count (excluding note): 366
Submitted on 31st March at 11.52AM
*Quick Author's Note*
First, and most importantly: thank you for reading!
If you enjoyed this story, the best compliment you can give me is to share it, or read another.
A Year of Stories: I'm writing a story every day this year. This one makes an 91 day streak since the 1st January. I'm collating them in my Index post.
Edit: the story behind the story - this is partly autobiographical. I'm not actually old for grandchildren, but we did plant a tree out front, and it did snap during a row shortly after being planted. It survived, and thrived.
The prompt I used for this was "if it's your birthday this month, write a story that is autobiographical, or partly autobiographical".
Leave me a link if you use this prompt!
If you'd like some more prompts to get your inky juices flowing, have a look at my prompts for April! These include my birthday indulgence: a Fucked Up Fairy Tales Unofficial Challenge, which I'll be posting more about soon 😁
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Comments (15)
I felt it like a poem of youth! Thank you!
" Youth often thrives on drama, yet lacks a spine." is a fantastic line L.C. I like how the fragile cherry blossom tree serves as a perfect image for the young love described, and how both ultimately make it through the trials. The second-last paragraph in particular has some beautiful imagery in it too:)
A lovely life story, and trees hold memory. We have Jacarandah's, all violet purple, suspended high, across the suburbs. Then like a dump of flowery snow down it all comes carpeting lawns and driveways. Unfortunately they turn brown quickly and become a work safety nightmare if they're not cleaned up quickly. Sorry for killing the vibe.
Beautiful story. I'm glad the tree survived, and the relationship too.
A heartwarming story, L.C. It brought memories of many things, not the least of which was the Cherry Blossom Festival in Seattle. Unrelated, really, but a wonderful experience. Love the way you've woven this into a life shared.
This is so eloquently written and so beautiful! Loved how you interwove a narrative of love so splendidly with the tree analogy and imagery!
Very nice story!
It is indeed cherry blossom season. May you enjoy wonder & beauty & a faith in one another that endures.
We bought a house. Empty of Things, but filled with potential. (favorite line) of yours in one of my favorite stories of yours!
Thought this was beautiful. Can tell it’s (semi) autobiographical. I was going to send you a pic of the cherry blossoms here in D.C. and then realized I couldn’t attach a pic! Great piece L.C.
Well-wrought! Every little tree has the potential to become an ancient bastion of nature. Even Yggdrassil was once a sapling!
There are so many insightful thoughts in this piece. youth and relationships, they thrive on emotional drama. well done
Great story! Glad your cherry tree lived!
Happy Spring and Happy Easter L.C. "Youth often thrives on drama, yet lacks a spine." So true and perfectly worded. This story brings up so many ideas and memories (all of which are competing in my mind right now) -- and all of them good, which is atypical for me. Usually I get a mix of good, bad, and where'd that come from? Loved your story! Enjoyed reading it so much.
LC, this story feels true and hits home. My wife and I will celebrate 45 years of marriage this Spring, and your story evokes our own hard earned life together. Honestly and beautifully rendered!