My little Brother
Inhibit to follow through...
From the window
I watched
As he,
Round Rock the other side of the road.
He abodes the same facial expression...
Gaping stoutly forward.
The stormwater swooshed over the windshield of the Ford F150.
I grabbed my phone and endeavor
To try at another buzz...
No Signal
I knew that no time soon would Mark, rostrum from the Arcade Game.
My little brother was not a techie, but whenever mom gave the “ok “ for us to Runnalong to the Arcade we stayed for hours.
Mark was determined to beat a record 🏆
Finally, Mom called
Mark won some money.
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Very nice!
Great writing and vivid imagery x
Great expressions, You have a way with words.
Very good
Hello fellow reader! Give my story a read: https://vocal.media/filthy/the-prettiest-girl-in-class
Congrats on your Top Story, Lonzo! I enjoyed this one!
I really liked this. Great writing!
Winning money through playing video games! I love it!
Good job! Mark got some praise for his amazing imagination. Continue your efforts.
Great story, Lonzo! Congrats on the Top!
Well done getting top story
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Yayyyy congratulations on your Top Story!
Congratulations on Top Story!
Nicely done. Congrats on the TS
Well done! Awesome imagination and an added plus; Mark won some 💰 Keep it up! 👏 💙 😃 🎉
Well Done HL!
Awesome 🤩 congratulations on top story!
Awesome! And congrats. Lonzo! 💖
Love this, Lonzo!!! Congratulations on T S!!!💖💖💕
Well done
Congratulations on Top Story, Lonzo! Well-deserved!
Congratulation on your top story
Congratulations on this being a Top Story Lonzo. You so very much deserve it my friend!
It's a very dreamy story it feels like a childhood memory. Congrats on TS