My little Brother
Inhibit to follow through...
From the window
I watched
As he,
Round Rock the other side of the road.
He abodes the same facial expression...
Gaping stoutly forward.
The stormwater swooshed over the windshield of the Ford F150.
I grabbed my phone and endeavor
To try at another buzz...
No Signal
I knew that no time soon would Mark, rostrum from the Arcade Game.
My little brother was not a techie, but whenever mom gave the “ok “ for us to Runnalong to the Arcade we stayed for hours.
Mark was determined to beat a record 🏆
Finally, Mom called
Mark won some money.
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>That was a bad idea. I thought you knew… >Oh, the pathos! I don’t really know you as well as I should. In fact, I may not know the real you at all. That essential, sparkling you that you only reveal to a select few. Had I been paying more attention to the stories you are so fond of telling, in which you are invariably author, narrator and protagonist, I would not have been so foolish as to set you up on a blind date. After all, no friend has ever done anything of the kind for another. That’s preposterous. What is a friend, really?
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The Boys' fourth season opens with a hint that something is wrong with Homelander in episode three. Homelander asserts that Starlighters pose the greatest threat to the United States of America during the most recent Vought conference, but he is undoubtedly having mental health issues. Homelander introduces Sister Sage and Firecracker as the newest members of The Seven in an attempt to deflect attention from him. Additionally, he is holding one spot open for Ryan, his "son."
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I want to grow
I want to grow and I’m going to grow. I’m not going to be this version of myself anymore and you won’t know who I become. You won’t talk to her, or be by her side as she goes through life— you won’t know her. Her heart won’t even remember the small moments that’ve clung to it for so long. I’ll watch her embrace a new life that has nothing to do with you, and there won’t be a space waiting like there has been for far too long.
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Comments (41)
Very nice!
Great writing and vivid imagery x
Great expressions, You have a way with words.
Very good
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Congrats on your Top Story, Lonzo! I enjoyed this one!
I really liked this. Great writing!
Winning money through playing video games! I love it!
Good job! Mark got some praise for his amazing imagination. Continue your efforts.
Great story, Lonzo! Congrats on the Top!
Well done getting top story
Yayyyy congratulations on your Top Story!
Congratulations on Top Story!
Nicely done. Congrats on the TS
Well done! Awesome imagination and an added plus; Mark won some 💰 Keep it up! 👏 💙 😃 🎉
Well Done HL!
Awesome 🤩 congratulations on top story!
Awesome! And congrats. Lonzo! 💖
Love this, Lonzo!!! Congratulations on T S!!!💖💖💕
Well done
Congratulations on Top Story, Lonzo! Well-deserved!
Congratulation on your top story
Congratulations on this being a Top Story Lonzo. You so very much deserve it my friend!
It's a very dreamy story it feels like a childhood memory. Congrats on TS
Congratulations on your Top Story