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Beware of the candy 🍬

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 11 months ago 1 min read
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This guy Asked for a Buck

But sold me candy,

now I only have


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I gobbled down the sweetness...

I came to feel lifted and light...

I was High ass Fuck!

My stomach argued with my mind,

So I stopped at McDonald's

For a Hash Brown...

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After stopping at Mickey Ds

My mom called me...

gotta get home now...

I'm walking instantaneous,

AirPods are louder than the Traffic...

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I looked to the left side of the road

And I saw a Big Pink Bunny

Climbing from an Easter Basket❗

Am I tripping or is this day

Stands getting longer?...

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

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  • Novel Allen10 months ago

    Ok. Funny story, moral, careful where you buy candy?

  • Linda Rivenbark11 months ago

    Surprises never cease! Good story!

  • Lol, this was fun! Creepy but still fun hahaha. I love it!

  • Dana Stewart11 months ago

    You are trippin good! Love the surreal factor!

  • Steffany Pope11 months ago

    Ooh! Nice one! It’s funny because I’m writing a poem entitled “Edies”

  • Brenton F11 months ago

    Yay for edies. Seeing big pink rabbits is a good indicator of triping yeah! And like New Model Army said What A Wonderful Way to Go!

  • Melissa Ingoldsby11 months ago

    Trippin’ out 😜I am Wondering about that candy 🍬

  • Phil Flannery11 months ago


  • Tiffany Gordon 11 months ago


  • Good question. Are you sure you didn't just meet Harvey? (Was he six feet tall?)

  • Donna Fox (HKB)11 months ago

    Lonzo, I can completely sympathize! Edibles are not something for the faint if heart, as much as people dislike smoking. Vaping the green goddess is the safest way to go! For the record, when in doubt have some OJ. It cancels out the hallucinations and mellows out the consumer considerably! .....or so I hear 😬🧐😜

  • Roy Stevens11 months ago

    😂🤣😎 Nice one my friend. You're not in the 6 are you?

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