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Edibles

Beware of the candy 🍬

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 24 days ago 1 min read
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Edibles
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This guy Asked for a Buck

But sold me candy,

now I only have

4bucks...

By Emilio Takas on Unsplash

I gobbled down the sweetness...

I came to feel lifted and light...

I was High ass Fuck!

My stomach argued with my mind,

So I stopped at McDonald's

For a Hash Brown...

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After stopping at Mickey Ds

My mom called me...

gotta get home now...

I'm walking instantaneous,

AirPods are louder than the Traffic...

By Arturo Castaneyra on Unsplash

I looked to the left side of the road

And I saw a Big Pink Bunny

Climbing from an Easter Basket❗

Am I tripping or is this day

Stands getting longer?...

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

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  • Linda Rivenbark20 days ago

    Surprises never cease! Good story!

  • Lol, this was fun! Creepy but still fun hahaha. I love it!

  • Dana Stewart23 days ago

    You are trippin good! Love the surreal factor!

  • Steffany Pope23 days ago

    Ooh! Nice one! It’s funny because I’m writing a poem entitled “Edies”

  • Brenton F23 days ago

    Yay for edies. Seeing big pink rabbits is a good indicator of triping yeah! And like New Model Army said What A Wonderful Way to Go!

  • Trippin’ out 😜I am Wondering about that candy 🍬

  • Phil Flannery23 days ago

    Trippy

  • Tiffany Gordon 23 days ago

    😁

  • Good question. Are you sure you didn't just meet Harvey? (Was he six feet tall?)

  • Donna Fox24 days ago

    Lonzo, I can completely sympathize! Edibles are not something for the faint if heart, as much as people dislike smoking. Vaping the green goddess is the safest way to go! For the record, when in doubt have some OJ. It cancels out the hallucinations and mellows out the consumer considerably! .....or so I hear 😬🧐😜

  • Roy Stevens24 days ago

    😂🤣😎 Nice one my friend. You're not in the 6 are you?

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