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From A Prompt By Cathy From A Prompt By Heather - Why don't you write a story about a food-eating contest on the waterfront?

By Mike Singleton - MikeydredPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
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Elvis: "You think you can eat more than me?"

Marlon: "What have you got"

Elvis: "The burger van has burgers, cheeseburgers, and more burgers"

Marlon: "Gimme five"

Elvis (To Burger Flipper): "Ten cheeseburgers"

Burger Flipper: "Ten cheeseburgers? Who's payin'"

Elvis throws him a hundred dollars.

Elvis: "Keep the change"

The burger flipper started up his stove.

The Burger War began, Elvis Presley vs Marlon Brando!!

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock11 months ago

    Does Elvis get peanut butter on his?

  • Thavien Yliaster11 months ago

    Yeah, that does sound like Elvis, and what he would eat too. Surprised You went with burgers and not PB&J and bacon.

  • Now I'm craving burgers, lol! This was awesome!

  • Lol 😆 AWESOME❗❗😉 👍 YOU ARE ONE TALENTED GUY❗

  • Lana V Lynx11 months ago

    I laughed out loud at the end.

  • Cathy holmes11 months ago

    Haha. This is great. Love it.

  • I won't eat nuthin but a corn-dog...lol great job

  • Dana Crandell11 months ago

    Hm.... is there a Blame series in the making here?

  • Babs Iverson11 months ago

    Love this, Mike!!!💖💖💕

  • Heather Hubler11 months ago

    LOL!! It's so funny because when I gave Cathy those prompts, I meant them separately so she'd have a few ideas. Of course her genius (and now yours) put them together!! This was great!!!

  • Leslie Writes11 months ago

    😂 I see what you did here and I love it! These two would definitely be worthy opponents!

  • Mariann Carroll11 months ago

    This was a very fun read , excellent story to the prompt

  • Paul Stewart11 months ago

    haha, love it. Made me smile and chuckle. Can actually envision this happening really!

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