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The Un-Welcoming To Ghana: You Don't Invite Someone To A Dirty House
Thursday, 24 August 2023 By: TB Obwoge Momma Ebo, (That's what I will call her) would awake around 5 am, I think, because morning wasn't my thing after all.
IwriteMywrongsPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueRap
Where did you learn to write poetry? I read a lot of poetry. That's true. More often, I listened to rap. While I like most music, rap will always be one of my favorite genres. It has taught me more than rhythm and rhyme. It’s taught me about the world.
Atomic HistorianPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueLife - A Crowing Achievement
The viral phenomenon, Life, is an epic adventure with a star-studded cast. At it’s heart is a striving for meaning in a seemingly senseless world. Everyone’s experience of this classic is paradoxically both unique and alike. Although long, most wish it was longer, and yet will only enjoy it once.
Michael DarvallPublished 9 months ago in Critique"Our Eyes Will Be On Coraline"
An eerie tale with an uncertain outcome. She's a child bored out of her mind in a new home, lacking her parents' attention. Relatable. Unfortunately for her, she gains her "Other Mother's" attention instead.
The Calvin Stickers
Let the grifters grift. It’s their only gift. You work hard on your craft. You spend hours on your craft. Just for someone to drop a link. Or worse, they drop something unrelated. It stinks. Maybe Bill Watterson was right, when he chose to ignore the sticker grifters. We’ll see.
Atomic HistorianPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueDoes size matter?
Does size matter? Am I critiquing an actual work here? Nope. Just expressing a thought. How big should a link be at the end of an article? I often like my pics for covers, because some Unsplash images make links too large when linked at the bottom of an article.
Atomic HistorianPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueEthereal Symphony
In this captivating artwork, luminous strokes dance gracefully, forming a breathtaking play of light. Yet, while composition echoes brilliance, an opportunity for deeper narrative connection arises. By intertwining thematic elements, this symphony could evoke profound emotions, ensuring lasting resonance in the observer's heart.
Peter TanjalaPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueA Critique of The Good Earth
Depression. Dark. Deterioration. “The Good Earth” is insulting and disrespectful to women. It is appalling to read from a feminist point of view. A story of a woman who kills her own children and hides in the shadows of her husband. The story highlights death and famine with no hope.
Stephanie ColellaPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueA Critique of The Ex
Visually appealing, however, the content swiftly proves mediocre at best. Accommodating a substantial lack of originality, with predictable plot twists, awful character development, and a final act that will leave even the most easily pleased with a sour taste in their mouths. A complete unadulterated disappointment. Avoid at all costs.
Sian N. CluttonPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueSkinamarink
If you are looking to waste two hours staring at a black screen waiting for something to happen, then this is the movie for you. The directors attempt at psychological terror fails from the very first dark screen. See "Barbie" instead and get a few laughs with her and Ken.
Barbara Gode WilesPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueShadows of Change
Title: Shadows of Change: The Niger Republic Coup Update In the heart of the Sahel region, where the golden sands whispered tales of ancient civilizations and modern aspirations, the Niger Republic stood as a crossroads of culture and history. The landlocked nation was no stranger to political upheavals, yet the events that unfolded during the summer of 2023 were to become a pivotal chapter in its history.
Ramadan JosephPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueShrek: A Disney Works Nightmare
Shrek is one of Disney Works' worst movies. Coming out in 2001 and becoming a top seller it does NOT deserve it. It's an overdone trope that an ugly guy with a horrible personality gets a beautiful lady with an equally ugly personality. It's overdone and a horribly produced movie.
Haylee MarickPublished 9 months ago in Critique