The Vocal Crime Buster
Who Stole The Tiffany Gordon The Soldier Nutcracker, Award?
Two nights before Christmas, In the vocal mansion
None of the vocal creators was writing not even Mike Singleton Mikey-
Dred.
The Titles of Stories were on display with care;
Hoping to win a challenge on Vocal on Christmas Day
All the creators were in bed nestled and snugged
While a vision of winning the biggest Vocal Challenge Stories dances in their heads.
Mother Combs and Babs Iverson could not even take a winter nap with stories in their heads.
When out of the lawn a footprints in the snow,
Tiffany Gordon, the faithful Soldier Nutcracker in pink,
Sprang from her guarded position of prayer to see what was up
Dharrsheena Raja Segarran, dressed as Santa trying to kill the Christmas joy and bring Horror to the Holiday season.
Tiffany tore open the shutters with care to her surprise a full moon was that night and fresh fallen snow was on the ground.
When what to her wondering eyes did appear, Krumpus, Grinch, and Dharrsheena Raja tip-toed with their bikes to the Vocal house.
Even Justin@vocal was fast asleep in his room unaware the Christmas Bandits were planning to steal his Christmas Vocal Prizes under the tree.
Tiffany knew the moment they must be, Dharrsheena Raja Segarran and her Bandit of three were out to steal Christmas gifts award and spoil the Challenges with care.
Dharrsheena Raja Segarran, Grinch, and Krumpus got on their bike.
So up to the housetop their bike flew, Now Grinch and Now Krumpus!!!!
With their empty bike baskets, She heard a thump and wheel scritching on the roof.
Tiffany drew in her soldier's head and turned around to the fireplace.
Down the Chimney Krumpus, Grinch, and Dharrsheena Raja Segarran, were dressed in Santa red suits with white fur.
Their clothes were all tarnished with blood, ashes and hoot. Empty Sacks of bags on their backs.
Mischievous glee was on their eyes as they opened their bags and stole the Challenge prizes from the tree. Even the Tiffany Gordon Soldier Nutcracker was kidnap with glee.
Krumpus and the Grinch were drooling green stuff out of their mouth with glee.
They had round hairy bellies that shook with their mischievous glee.
"Enough boys let’s go!!! There will be no laughter and winner for this Christmas Challenge for we took all their prizes, ha ha ha ha!!!" Dharrsheena said with her queen's horror laughter.
Up the Chimney they climb with the loot.
Riding their bikes with bags full of prizes to their Bandit cave up in Grinch Mountain they hide.
" Please take the prizes back, the Vocal creators will be very sad this Christmas." Tiffany Gordon the sweet pink soldier nutcracker said to the Christmas Bandit.
" Be quiet, or off with your toy soldier head, hahaha!" Dharrsheena commanded.
" Who do you think you are? The queen of cards in Wonderland? Wake up, girly!!!" Tiffany said.
The Grinch and Krumpus were happy to see a girl fight, they had not had this much excitement up in their snow mountain. These will certainly cause an avalanche and cover the entire Vocal Village below.
"Who are you calling girly? I am the Queen of Horror. HaHaHa!!!Grinch and Krumpus put her in the dungeon our fire-breathing dragons will keep her mouth shut."Dharrsheena Commanded.
Little did they know Tiffany's Barbie angel babies were coming to their mama's rescue.
The Vocal Rescue squad: Pastor Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock, Judey Kalchik, Rick Henry Christopher, C.H. Richard, Heather Humbler, Dana Stewart, Donna Renee, Oneg in The Artic, J. Delaney-Howe, Jason B., L.C. Schafer, Chloe Holy, J.S.Wade, GRZ Colm, Handsomelouiethepoet, Clyde E. Dawkin, JasonM. , Cathy Holms, and all the Vocal Creators gather to plan their investigation rescue.
Stay tune to Part 2: Vocal Squad Rescue team 2
Merry Christmas to All and To All A Happy New Year !!!!
About the Creator
Mariann Carroll
Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.
Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .
fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Comments (40)
Congrats on being a leader. Much deserved
I love this story! Great job, Mariann! Congratulations on your Top Story!
This was brilliant. Proud to be part of the rescue team!
Wow!!!!!!!!!!! Kudos.
What a fantatic idea. This was a lot of fun to read. I've got to say this line was spot on, " 'Who are you calling girly? I am the Queen of Horror.' ". It's funny because it's true! Congratulations on Top Story.
I had so much fun reading this! 😂😂😂😂 Congratulations on top story!!❤
This is really cute!
😂😂😂Congratulations on top story!!🎉🎉🎉
This is amazing!! Haha love it. Season's Greetings!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA NO ONE GETS ANY PRIZES!!! THEY'RE ALL MINE!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Gosh I had so much fun reading this! Thank you so much for making me the main villain! It's a role I was born to play hehehehehhehee. Can't wait for part 2!! I hope the rescue mission fails 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Congratulations on your Top Story!
Now that was a story to tickle my Christmas fancy. Well thought out and fun to read. You made my holidays Mariann
fun story- congratulations
This was a super fun read, Mariann! 🤗❤️
Mariann this is the cutest story - I loved how even Mikey wasn't writing. 😂Thank you for the shoutout, too!
Awe, that was fun and entertaining. Great!!!
This was awesome. Great job. P.S. I rock with Dharrsheena... Let's add a little horror to the holiday season! <3
I LOVE this!!!!!!
I love all the mentions, lol! This is truly a Top Story for the season! Congratulations and I have now subscribed!
Congratulations on your TOP STORY! It is Well-deserved! 😍
Love this 💙
This had me laughing until I could laugh no more. A cleverly crafted story Mariann, and have a fantastic Christmas!
Love this ❤️
Congratulations on top story 💓
Very fun piece, Mariann! Love your creativity! Awesome job and congrats on top story!
This is adorable! :D