Confessions of me
A soundtrack
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In quiet little moments, that grow smaller
I shrink like Alice, swallowing a pill, doubt my only friend
half the size I was, the confidence I felt, slowly vanishing
sliding into darkness, I disappear, below the surface
to drown alone, beneath the waves, chin on my knees
looking up, from the bottom, pretending not to hear
the voice I keep quiet, whispering
I told you, I always told you
they always laughed, when you fell
they never liked you, never at all
I should swim, I should say its not true
but I just sit below the water, and listen.
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Gary Jules, Mad World
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Sandy blonde hair, lifts from her shoulders, a breeze of sea water
sails in from a calm ocean, her eyes catch mine, blue windows revealing a
light from her soul, a tidal wave she always brings, rushes up in crests
and falls of everyday, we have ever spent together, my voice carries
a single confession, mixing with sounds of salt water, coming
and leaving, across grains of sand ... You are my harbor in the storm
her hand inside mine, we escape into a waterfall, washing over
our skin, our foreheads touching, her smile greeting mine
we move closer, desire taking over, our lips longing for the other
breaths falling short, heaven teasing us, in perfect moments
we step from the water's cascade, cool air rushing, against our frail bodies
she presses into me, music only we can hear, fills the air
an outside world keeps spinning, unnoticed, as we dance alone
fading from a busy, hustle all around us, our hearts beating
a single rhythm, a million hopes and dreams, passing silently
between our eyes.
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Lights (feat Coeur de Pirate) , Peace Sign
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In a world searching for freedom, I am lost, I am also saved
a hero sometimes, a villain others, I have failed, I have overcome
fought for others, fought only for me, I have looked for redemption
from the things, I have sung in this life, a Lion hunting, a Caribou fleeing
a witness to harm, a saint to many, a prisoner, a jailer, a pair of feet
standing on the trials of time, a speaker for forgiveness, from the troubles
I have seen, a voice asking the same for the people, I have met on this path
of journey, in the hours and days, I have traveled with an imperfect soul
searching to be better than who I was.
Bob Marley, Redemption song
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I have felt drops of rain, cleansing my tired soul, felt rays of sunlight giving
rebirth, felt dew forming on my skin, my spirit has been freed in a dream
soaring past white clouds, floating in my mind, an eagle spreading it's
wings into a heaven, stretching out beyond a clear blue, my body has
flown over lakes and rivers, hills and fields, my essence has been a rainbow
shinning in the light, of storms that drifted away
I have seen clearly, from mountain tops
looking at valleys below, my arms moving from my sides
my feet lifting from the ground, all of my cares, fading in the distance
I have spun circles, with my eyes searching, the colors of a horizon
nothing but blessings, filling my heart, all of my bad feelings
disappearing, in the glow of a new dawn, stretching fingers across
an early morning sky.
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Jimmy Cliff, I can see clearly now
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In dreams, that kept leaving, like dust clouds blowing
in small tornadoes spinning, above forgotten dirt roads
I have performed, in front of imaginary, audiences
on stages, in futures, that never seemed to materialize
I have kept, reaching out my hands, to dreams that
always seemed to be, inches from where, I could grasp them
I thought if I kept trying, if I didn't give up, then maybe...
but even as I kept, growing older, and those dreams kept
not coming, I thought if I kept believing, that one day
I would touch the stars.
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Kevin Johnson, Rock&Roll I gave you the best years of my life
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I have felt the strength of a hand, angry across my face
been knocked down, by the fury of a strike
felt the kinetic energy, of an impact, sending me to the ground
I have looked, into the eye of the storm, decided not to surrender
pushed my way up, gotten back to my feet, proclaimed
I'm ready, refused to give in, to lay down, to walk away
wiped blood from my face, stayed strong, stood against the world
an underdog, making a fight, in the middle of a ring
unwilling to take another fall.
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Survivor, Eye of the Tiger
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In moments, that danced like rain, dropping on the ground
I have lost everything, heartaches have ripped
every piece of fabric, holding my fragile, spirit together
bottles of liquor, have given me comfort, against tears
falling into my soul, I have lived, while I died, while I couldn't
let go, while I buried my pain so deep inside, I refused to
move on, even though I knew the road, would always be going away
I have told lies, just to get me by, just to give an empty hope
to a dying dream, because I wouldn’t believe, that all I wanted was gone
I have gotten down, on my knees, when all I had was a prayer
to make it through, another night, without the one
I needed most.
~
Morgan Wade, Stay
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I've had good memories, made bad ones too, had friends I've lost
friends I've gained, places I’ve wanted to go, places I've already been
a child raised by a mother, a father raising daughters, a father raising
a son, I've watched my children grow, comforted when they scraped knees
celebrated when they rode bikes the first time, always giving each my best
I've tried to teach them, to show a better way, from my mistakes
felt joy when they smiled, heartache when tears ran down their cheeks
sometimes I was tired, sometimes I needed a break, but I always stayed
time has gone by, in the blink of an eye, three have gotten older
one is still young, the children, the babies I had, the drops of water
who started in streams, who went along currents, to rivers flowing into
oceans, who became sails, filled with wind, are parting into open waters
I miss everyday they held my hand, everyday I was their world
the hardest part of letting my older ones go, has been watching them begin
to live their own lives, I know they have to go, I know I have to let them
leave, but wherever they go, I will be there, no matter where their paths
lead, I will love them with every breath I take, with every beat of my heart
I see my youngest as she grows, and I know, she is the last moments
like this I will have.
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Yusuf/Cat Stevens, Father and Son
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I've had nights, when I couldn't sleep, days when I couldn't wake
times when all I could see was pain, when all I could do was think about
the other side, times when I got so lost inside my skin, I couldn't
recognize my face, times when all I needed was faith, from a church
standing in my heart, only I didn't know, if the doors would still open
times when the weight was too heavy, when I didn't know, if there would
still be a preacher inside, behind a pulpit with a sermon, for a lost sheep
trying to find, their way back home, through the darkness.
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Aloe Blacc, Wake Me Up
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I've had mornings, when I opened my eyes, wide awake
mornings, when I couldn't wait to get outside, days on the basketball court
when I was young, nights drinking under the stars, days when the sun
seemed like it would shine, all summer long, nights when I was thankful
to be alive, when nothing seemed like, it could go wrong, when my friends
surrounded me, when the good times seemed like they would
go on forever, when the world seemed like, it was finally turning
my way, when the only thought, inside my head was
I hope it always stays this way.
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Ice Cube, It was Good Day
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Comments (21)
WOW, omg, such a truly beautiful and unique collection of songs and incredibly thoughtful and emotional poetry, Will 🥹❤️ I can't believe I missed this, but I'm so glad I found it! I love "Mad World" so much and omg, the French in "Lights" had me like 😍 And, as always, your words are stunning. 🥹
Good one Will. I love several including Cat Stevens and the cover of Mad World.
So beautifully written of your story with poetry and music intertwined. You blended pain and joy in words that express the human experience. Thank you so much for sharing. Two of my favorite songs I really enjoyed listening to, " I Can See Clearly Now" and "Wake Me Up". ❤️
Take guts to put something out there so personal. I feel like I know you better. i like your reflections on parenting, I found them especially relatable.
Spectacularly written!! So creative and original!! Loving it!!!💖💖💕
Will, this was such a beautiful poem/ story about what it is to be human and what that experience was like for you! I also loved the music additions that created a change in tempo/ really set the mood for each section! So smart!
I really enjoyed this, a very unique take on the challenge. Well done, indeed.
Love the idea and the execution. Well done!
Unique and fascinating approach to the challenge. Kind of next level thoughtfulness going on here. Impressive. ❤
A great original take on the challenge, most of these are in my collection. A Top Story contender definitely.
Oh how unique!! I love the way you did this! At first I thought it was the lyrics to the songs but I caught on haha. The section about the kids growing up really spoke to me ❤️❤️
Haunting, poetic, melodious, I loved the first one, I love it by Susan Boyle though. Kevin Johnson was haunting. Aloe Blacc is groovy-hippie days. I think first time listening to Ice Cube. Poetry is poetic. I really enjoyed this. Bravo.
Admittedly, you have inspired me! I love the song selections you have for this piece, and the confession behind each one. Well done. Thanks for sharing your love for music.
Wow. This is beautiful. Well done.
This is beyond brilliant– a life story through poetry. Very moving and emotional, along with some fantastic musical choices. A strong and very unique piece for the challenge- incredible job!
Wow I really like what you did with this. The story that progressed through with all the songs peppered in, and you chose some great songs that really complement the piece! Loved the flow of this, excellent!
There were nights I couldn't sleep and days I couldn't wake...so well done
I couldn’t figure out a way to draft something for this challenge but this was different and quite engaging. The words were rolling off my tongue as if they were mine. Outstanding!
Oh wow! I really loved your poetic style for this challenge! It was so beautiful and I enjoyed all the songs! You did a fantastic job on this!
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This is such a beautiful rendition of the melodic milestones challenge. I really enjoyed the imagery you employed when creating poems representative of each song. Really, really well done.