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A Crown Cinquain Inspired By A Chat With My Muse

By Mike Singleton - MikeydredPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
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You and Me

I was recently made aware of a poetic form called the Crown Cinquain by Talia Devora and her poem Dvarim Ktanim (Little Things)

This page gives a detailed insight into it.

This site lists a lot of variations which means I have a lot of poetic forms to practice on in the coming weeks.

I am going to choose my Muse as the subject and inspiration for this poem , my first Crown Cinquain. There is no need for rhyme , like a haiku or writing in a pentameter. It's about the syllables.

Music wise we'll go with The 1975 - "Me & You Together"

֍֍֍֍֍֍֍֍֍֍֍֍֍֍֍֍

You , Me

Together we sit, holding hands

We chat about music

And the weather

It’s Fine

֍֍

It’s Fine

We rise and walk out the front door

Enjoying the bright sun

Keeping us warm

No , Hot

֍֍

No Hot

Is how we feel , the lake invites

Should we wade the water

And Cool our feet

Ah Cool

֍֍

Ah Cool

We want an Ice Cream, but have none

We have some in the fridge

Back in the flat

To Lick

֍֍

To Lick

The Ice cream , cooling our hot tongues

Slipping down our dry throats

Soothingly Nice

You Me

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