You had me at hello.
Lustful longing leads to longer life. Am I losing my senses?
Looking longingly, knowing that this first time can never be again.
Your voice vexes me, I need to hear what you say, know what you think.
Oh, that scent slowly and seductively spilling over my senses.
Do you sense it too?
My nerves alert in anticipation of our first touch. I feel the expectation to feel you.
Salutations to my salivation, awaiting to savour your kiss.
This could be bliss.
The preceding poem was all killer and no filler but apparently not long enough to live in this community, so here is the filler. Tada!
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Phil Flannery
Damn it, I'm 61 now, which means I'm into my fourth year on Vocal, I have an interesting collection of stories. I love the Challenges and enter, when I can, but this has become a lovely hobby.
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Comments (4)
A fun and charming entry Phil. Great work! 👏😄
I love how you played with alliteration in this one 😁 And haha at the filler!
Fantastic poem! Lol, your filler!
Sweet!!!💖💖💕