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A Poem About Loss
Speaking to a headstone
To a child beneath the ground.
My friends have come to call me mad
But here, there is no sound.
So many times I've come here,
Remembering those days.
We spent them laughing long ago.
You took them to your grave.
It gives me little comfort
To say my small hello,
For I know you can't hear me.
That you're gone under the snow.
I always will remember
The peace I found in you.
When I gazed upon your sweet face
I forgot the pain I knew.
I miss your laugh in silence,
I wish to hear you sing,
I miss your growing stages
Never knowing what they'd bring.
Every heart has some great task
For shoes no one can fill.
In mine it's to replace you
And nobody ever will.
About the Creator
Michelle Truman | Prose and Puns | Noyath Books
I fell in love with speculative fiction and poetry many years ago, but I have precious little time to write any. It was high time I started making Prose and Puns a priority, starting with Purple Poetry, Auqredis, and the World of Noyath.
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Comments (2)
It’s hard to praise hard truths but this is a dose of reality that I have endured with the loss of my 20 yrs old son in 2018. You have captured the truth in an excellent and compelling way.
Heartbreaking😔