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Poem 5 from my chapbook "As Glamorous as a Kidney"

By Michael ButorovichPublished 16 days ago 1 min read
Top Story - April 2024
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I have no real confidence.

I watch “success” after “success”

After “success” and finally feel

As if there is hope.

Hope to succeed again.

{

Then there is failure.

“Failure” to say “success” can

Come through again.

{

Then there is the “failure”

{

“Failure”

“Failure”

Failure

{

Failure.

…..

The floor is cold.

Everything is fucked up.

Nothing is going to be right.

{

Yet, somehow the empty body is

Arise knowing perfection is only

A dream and all is lost.

{

When a tiny thing, whatever it may

Be restores the will to build.

{

It could be the image of a fool.

It could be a flower.

It could be waking up and finding

A way to laugh sincerely.

{

It could also be itself showing

Through thyself.

{

Forget these words.

Remember

“The fool”

“Remember the flower who grew”

“Remember what made you laugh”

{

“Remember what made you You

Whether you failed or succeeded”

{

That is all.

}

Filter to April 1st, 2017

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Michael Butorovich

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  • Novel Allen12 days ago

    Words written from the heart are the best. Congrats on your kudos.

  • Andrea Corwin 12 days ago

    And yes, there is it: When a tiny thing, whatever it may Be restores the will to build. Remember. Congrats on TS!!

  • Great! Well done for the TS.

  • Nice wow. I haven't read slam poetry before, but this is awesome. I will check your other writings too. Congrats on TS!

  • LASZLO SLEZAK14 days ago

    Congratulations, top story.

  • Ameer Bibi14 days ago

    Congratulations 🎉🎉 for top story You're an unstoppable force! Your drive and ambition are incredibly commendable.

  • Anna 14 days ago

    Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳

  • This has a beautiful cadence to it that draws out the rawness of the words. Great job and congrats on the Top Story!

  • Lindsay Sfara14 days ago

    Absolutely wonderful work. I loved every line of this, and such a great message in the end. Congrats on top story!

  • Cathy holmes14 days ago

    This is wonderful. Well done and congrats on the TS.

  • Gabriel Huizenga14 days ago

    I would absolutely love to hear this spoken aloud- powerful stuff! Congrats on the Top Story! :)

  • ROCK 15 days ago

    Subscribed. This feels like a good slam poetry gig to me. One can almost shout it. Please keep writing, don't think about success, just your truths.

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