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With Trepidation

For Hannah Moore's Community Renga

By Paul StewartPublished 20 days ago 1 min read
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With Trepidation
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with trepidation

my heart and mind uneasy

as I look skywards

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This is part of the Community Renga that Hannah started. Check out this post for more information -

And here is the piece in progress as it grows:

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About the Creator

Paul Stewart

Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.

Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.

"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson

The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection is now available!

https://paulspoeticprints.etsy.com

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran19 days ago

    That was so relatable! Loved your lines!

  • Cathy holmes19 days ago

    nice addition. That was a great idea by Hannah. It's so nice to see the community get involved in a non-challenge. Well done, my friend.

  • D.K. Shepard19 days ago

    Works so well on its own and fit nicely in the renga!

  • I didn't know about this form, so I looked it up, very interesting.

  • Joe O’Connor19 days ago

    I’m interested to see how the Renga grows! I feel you on that one Paul- sometimes seeing something so fast and big and powerful above us makes us feel the exact opposite.

  • Hannah Moore19 days ago

    Very nice. And accurate for my own experience. It was a 27 hour travel day I did not enjoy.....

  • Teresa Renton19 days ago

    I love this Paul, love the sense of longing evoked in such a small space.

  • Good one Paul

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