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Whose in Control

Influenced by the sun

By Antoinette L BreyPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Whose in Control
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The sun-soaking into my bare skin

A beach, a backyard?

No, a major street in Winston

In my mind I desire to lay naked

I absorbed the warm mixing with the chilling breeze

but in reality I stayed clothed

And smiled, glad that I was not psychotic

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About the Creator

Antoinette L Brey

I am an elder in a time of freedom. I am now retired. All i want to do is have fun. Without a daily routine, my imagination is one of my only salvations. I am not planning on writing a book, it is just for my own pleasure

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  • Donna Fox (HKB)about a year ago

    This was a great poem Antoinette! It brought a smile to my face, especially the ending about not being psychotic! Loved it!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Super!!!💖💖💕

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