Poets logo

When Things Get Too Heavy

We reach our breaking point

By Dharrsheena Raja SegarranPublished 4 years ago • Updated 3 years ago • 1 min read
Image from Pinterest

It was all too heavy The weight of it all Was just Too Heavy She wanted to let go But it was pulling her down Dragging her Through its darkest depths She tried to break free It was pointless Like quicksand It started to swallow her She struggled to get out It made her sink even deeper She needed to let go But how? She already tried struggling Then she remembered Quicksand loosens up When we stop struggling She learned to relax It let her go She felt lighter She was floating In the vast ocean She went with the flow Of the current and the waves It was so much easier So much lighter She felt the bliss She wanted to float forever For it was a beautiful feeling __________________________________________ Thank you so much for reading this! 🥰 If you liked my writing, please leave a comment, click the heart and subscribe for free! You might enjoy this as well:

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Dharrsheena Raja Segarran

🥇 Vocal Creator of the Year (2023) 🏆

❤️ Erythrophile ❤️

✨️ Glitteringly Savage ✨️

🖤 Elegantly Disturbed Mind 🖤

Instagram 🤍 Facebook 🤍 Threads

Enjoyed the story? Support the Creator.

Subscribe for free to receive all their stories in your feed.

Subscribe For Free

Reader insights

Comments

There are no comments for this story

Be the first to respond and start the conversation.

Sign in to comment
    Written by Dharrsheena Raja Segarran