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When I see you

And when I see you

By Denise E LindquistPublished 3 years ago • 1 min read
When I see you
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When I see you

feeling blue.

Many a yesterday

without you.

It will be okay.

~

It will be okay

without you!

Many a yesterday,

feeling blue

when I see you.

~~~~

The Prompt - Write a poem that takes on a different meaning when you read the lines from bottom to top.

Your task is to create a reverse poem—an enchanting composition that unfolds with one meaning when reading the lines from top to bottom, and an entirely different meaning when reading the lines in reverse from bottom to top. Carefully choose words to construct lines that reveal hidden depths and unexpected twists in both directions. Your poem does not need to start and end with repeated lines.

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About the Creator

Denise E Lindquist

Retired, working part-time as a Native American culture consultant. I have an MSE, and an ABD. I write on Vocal, and Facebook. Poetry, non-fiction mostly, and working on fiction. Wife, mother, grandmother, and great grandmother.

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    Written by Denise E Lindquist