What Would Not Bow
Recorded in my own voice, placed at the end
I wailed waiting too,
trying to save you, I turned,
and we fell apart.
Hardened by your safety,
you opened your arms to flame
and slipped from my reach.
In grief’s rising sea,
you wanted something to hold;
I broke that in me.
Her lies filled the dark,
behind your father’s name
left me bone and dust.
Your gaze drifted east,
leaving my south‑bound hands still;
your borrowed gaze held mine.
In the mirror’s stillness,
I stripped the love held by my string,
and found no more tears.
I tried to nurse hope,
glancing back toward the moon’s glow;
it hid me, showed you.
The still bear remains —
no rose can move what won’t wake,
the stillness that would not bow.
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About the Creator
Caitlin Charlton
Writer first. Close reader and self‑taught critic shaping eloquence.
A survivor reclaiming her territory.
I write dark fiction and poetry through symbol, shadow, and fracture.
Always sharpening the craft. ✏️🔥👠
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