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What Would Not Bow

Recorded in my own voice, placed at the end

By Caitlin CharltonPublished 3 months ago • 1 min read
What Would Not Bow
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I wailed waiting too,

trying to save you, I turned,

and we fell apart.

Hardened by your safety,

you opened your arms to flame

and slipped from my reach.

In grief’s rising sea,

you wanted something to hold;

I broke that in me.

Her lies filled the dark,

behind your father’s name

left me bone and dust.

Your gaze drifted east,

leaving my south‑bound hands still;

your borrowed gaze held mine.

In the mirror’s stillness,

I stripped the love held by my string,

and found no more tears.

I tried to nurse hope,

glancing back toward the moon’s glow;

it hid me, showed you.

The still bear remains —

no rose can move what won’t wake,

the stillness that would not bow.

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About the Creator

Caitlin Charlton

Writer first. Close reader and self‑taught critic shaping eloquence.

A survivor reclaiming her territory.

I write dark fiction and poetry through symbol, shadow, and fracture.

Always sharpening the craft. ✏️🔥👠

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    Written by Caitlin Charlton