WE ARE ONE
From Across The Room
Before you were mine,
Conch call was divine.
Attending the event,
happy to be present,
then, across the room
YOU next to the groom.
Your eyes met mine.
Providence design.
True LOVE at first sight,
amazing so right.
Swept us off our feet.
Our hearts' rhythmic beat.
Always together.
Sunny fairweather.
Volcanic eruption.
Without destruction,
subsides into bliss.
Stealing many a kiss.
True Love at first sight,
amazing so right.
Your eyes still hold mine.
Passed the test of time.
Island our treasure.
We will be forever.
Simply tenderness;
becomes effortless.
Above all adore,
again onshore.
True LOVE at first sight,
amazing so right.
Under island sun.
We are one.
Writer's notes: Mahalo! Aloha! This poem will be submitted to Vocal's challenge "from across the room" that will be judged by Kirun Kapur who teaches at Amherst College and serves as editor of the Beloit Poetry Journal.
About the Creator
Babs Iverson
Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.
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Comments (10)
Beautiful 😍
Babs, I read it before. It’s a blessing to find such love . Thanks for sharing how you met your love ❤️
Previously hearted but now I can comment
Beautiful piece. Previously hearted.
Love it! Love st first sight is the best! 👀 💕
Beautifully written!
Well done 👍 Babs. I like it... hearted it, too.
Lovely poem, Babs! It has a nice, youthful vibe.
I read it before when you posted for the contest and thought it was great. What wouldn't be great with Elvis at the top!💕
So beautiful my friend and I love the video.