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Water & Sky

a haiku

By Gina C.Published 2 years ago β€’ 1 min read
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The blue between us

is still love - connected - like

water kissing sky.

Gina. C πŸ§šβ€β™€οΈβœ¨

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Author's note: Water reflects the sky, just like you reflect I. At our lowest, we are blue and not collected - though we somehow always stay connected...

just like the water and the sky.

πŸ’™The blue between us is still love - yes: "even so", "regardless", "nevertheless"...

though sometimes also stagnant, silent; lifeless.

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Thank you so much for reading! ☺️ I'm working really hard to grow my community on Vocal, so if you enjoyed this short haiku, I'd be over the moon if we could be friends and support each other here!

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About the Creator

Gina C.

Achievements:

  • Twice-published in Vocal's Moment of Freedom Collection:

My Soul of Red

Free Verse

Free-Form poet of ethereal styleπŸ§šβ€β™€οΈβœ¨

Fantasy writer

A sucker for a good rhyme

Follow my Ghosts of Relationships' Past series:)

TT: poetry.in_pajamas

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  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    I love this. Can't believe I haven't subscribed until now! Thanks for sharing.

  • Jo Darrallabout a year ago

    Loveliness!

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  • U.Rdiya2 years ago

    Loved both the poem and the note describing your point of view!

  • Wow, this was beautiful and melancholic! I loved it!

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  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    This is just gorgeous.

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Brilliant & beautiful!!!πŸ’•πŸ˜ŠπŸ’–

  • Heather Hubler2 years ago

    Those beautiful words and sentiments paired with the image - magic!! Loved it :)

  • KJ Aartila2 years ago

    Just gorgeous. :)

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