The blue between us
is still love - connected - like
water kissing sky.
Gina. C 🧚♀️✨
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Author's note: Water reflects the sky, just like you reflect I. At our lowest, we are blue and not collected - though we somehow always stay connected...
just like the water and the sky.
💙The blue between us is still love - yes: "even so", "regardless", "nevertheless"...
though sometimes also stagnant, silent; lifeless.
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Gina C.
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Free-Form poet of ethereal style🧚♀️✨
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I love this. Can't believe I haven't subscribed until now! Thanks for sharing.
Loveliness!
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Loved both the poem and the note describing your point of view!
Wow, this was beautiful and melancholic! I loved it!
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This is just gorgeous.
Brilliant & beautiful!!!💕😊💖
Those beautiful words and sentiments paired with the image - magic!! Loved it :)
Just gorgeous. :)