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Virginia Woolf Stones

when I gave away my power, I sank

By R.C. TaylorPublished 10 months ago Updated 10 months ago 1 min read
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Virginia Woolf Stones
Photo by Mohamed Nohassi on Unsplash

my dreams were high in the sky, fingertips brushing the tails of

the shooting stars they tried to catch before you kept filling their

pockets with Virginia Woolf stones and that's when they sank down

⠀⠀

down

past cloud nine candy floss they once ate happily while laughing

with their friends, carnival lights prism reflecting off their smile

past gentle rain that bathed their skin with soft, wet baptism, piano

melody played delicately on them by freshwater pianist fingers

down

past the red balloon they comforted that a little girl had let go of in

the grocery store parking lot after her mom warned her to hold tight

down

past figure eights they used to loop around tall skyscrapers, happy

that they were finally rising, rising, rising, breathless as with life

⠀⠀

down

past treetops where they lost some of them along the way because like

boosters on a rocket they couldn't take all of them when they first rose

down

past the tide that rocked them to and fro, shooshing them as if they

were a babe again as they said goodbye to sky, returning to the womb

⠀⠀

down

past the magnets that they used to stick on Davy Jones' locker when

they were just a young girl still figuring themselves out, clueless

down

my dreams

down

sank far

down

into Mariana Trench

down

where creatures never discovered wondered past them in welcoming

at the utter brilliance and beauty of their bioluminescence that was not

appreciated by you. they kept sinking down

⠀down

⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀down

⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀down

⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀down

⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀down

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About the Creator

R.C. Taylor

Part-time daydreamer. Full-time dork.

Follow along for stories about a little bit of everything (i.e. adventure, nostalgia, and other affairs of the heart, and anything else I want to honor and hold space for).

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  • Flamance @ lit13 days ago

    Great job congratulations

  • Cathy holmes9 months ago

    Wow. That's incredible. Well done

  • Paul Stewart9 months ago

    So very heartbreakingly sad, but incredibly beautifully written! So much skill in pace, word choice and brevity at work here. Well done!

  • Mackenzie Davis10 months ago

    Wow, RC, this is incredibly powerful, and so so sad. I feel the wrenching away of those dreams, and their will to survive despite everything. What an amazing contemplation on what happens to dreams when we let them go. 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

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