Twighlight: Breaking Dawn
Book Review Haiku
Okay, I wasn't going to inflict this upon you. But after reading so many other entries into Judey's book review haiku challenge, you've inspired me. Specifically inspired by HandsomelouiThePoet (aka, Lonzo Ward) & his delightful review of the series, this is for my son, always team Jacob, & the way he & his friends would scream with delight every time Jacob ripped off his shirt during a midnight screening. (Yes, I'm looking at you Tiffany. No not you, Tiff, the other Tiffany, the one Keenan knew in high school. They were actually more fun than the movie, & I enjoyed the movie in spite of the fact that it makes my wife just shake her head, lol.)
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My other best friend
Jacob, imprint on daughter
This is so awkward
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Here's Lonzo's take on the challenge:
https://vocal.media/poets/the-twilight-saga
About the Creator
Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock
Retired Ordained Elder in The United Methodist Church having served for a total of 30 years in Missouri, South Dakota & Kansas.
Born in Watertown, SD on 9/26/1959. Married to Sandra Jellison-Knock on 1/24/1986. One son, Keenan, deceased.
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Comments (12)
haha. as a twilight hater this was awesome. nice job!
Yayyyyyy! I'm team Jacob too! Loved your Haiku-review!
Thank you for sharing this fun memory of your son ❤️
Dear Pastor Randy; aka virtual bff. Inspired by our talk about Keenan I've written a very difficult piece for me and made mention of your contribution within it along with our fellow Author 'Doc Sherwood's' blessings. If, for any reason, you would like me to take your reference to it down I will do so immediately. It will be published (+/-) on the 1st. - Always with my Respect - J-Bud
Let work together p+lease ready my story and subscribe like I do nice to meet you face
Hahaha I loved the story behind it and the details of team Jacob.
I've read these books and seen these movies so many times :) I love that you have this wonderful memory of your son and his friends enjoying their time spent together with this series. Great one!!
I love twilight especially the last movie. It was awkward in the movie but it serve its purpose. I am so glad you are writing again 🥰🥳
Awesome Randy. Can totally get behind this one as a twilight fan and a team Jacob lol.
Lol I liked this! 😀😃😄😎
Fantastic!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕
Cute stuff Randy!!!!