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For Hannah Moore's Yūgen - a Community Renga

By Sonia Heidi UnruhPublished about a month ago 1 min read
Top Story - April 2024
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One pale petal clings

To my backpack. Pluck it, or

Let it be our guest?

~~~~~

Appreciation to Hannah Moore for her generous invitation to step into her writing space and join the dance of the Renga. See her breath-catching first stanza, Yūgen.

The invitation, and the poem in process, are linked below.

Haikunature poetry
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About the Creator

Sonia Heidi Unruh

I love: my husband and children; all who claim me as family or friend; the first bite of chocolate; the last blue before sunset; solving puzzles; stroking cats; finding myself by writing; losing myself in reading; the Creator who is love.

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  2. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Anna 29 days ago

    Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳

  • real Jemaabout a month ago

    This shouldn't qualify as an article

  • Andrea Corwin about a month ago

    Oh, yeah, CONGRATS on TS.🎉

  • Andrea Corwin about a month ago

    Beautiful, I loved this!!

  • Babs Iversonabout a month ago

    Short, sweet, simply superb!!! Loved it!!! Congratulations too!!!💕❤️❤️

  • D. D. Leeabout a month ago

    Good job on Top Story!

  • Dana Crandellabout a month ago

    This was such a great addition, Sonia, and ending it with a question was a perfect prompt!

  • Super cool haiku! Congrats on a top story!

  • Silver Serpent Booksabout a month ago

    Beautiful! I love how quickly you told a whole story. Loved this and congrats on the Top Story!

  • Heather Hublerabout a month ago

    I loved your lines for this!! What a wonderful community collab it turned out to be all from Hannah's inspiring creativity :)

  • Paul Stewartabout a month ago

    Beautiful and well done on Top Story for this, Sonia!

  • TheSpinstressabout a month ago

    This is beautiful; it feels serene.

  • Hannah Mooreabout a month ago

    Thank you, another beautiful stanza - I will write a linking 7,7 and add it!

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