Traveler's Choice
For Hannah Moore's Yūgen - a Community Renga
One pale petal clings
To my backpack. Pluck it, or
Let it be our guest?
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Appreciation to Hannah Moore for her generous invitation to step into her writing space and join the dance of the Renga. See her breath-catching first stanza, Yūgen.
The invitation, and the poem in process, are linked below.
About the Creator
Sonia Heidi Unruh
I love: my husband and children; all who claim me as family or friend; the first bite of chocolate; the last blue before sunset; solving puzzles; stroking cats; finding myself by writing; losing myself in reading; the Creator who is love.
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Dew drops reflected the light of the sun. The inhabitants of Whispering Woods woke up to the golden droplets of water on the leaves of the flora. The oaks particularly enjoyed the light and the maples did, too. Happiness enveloped all who lived there, even the rocks that cried out in the night delighted in the morning.
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Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳
This shouldn't qualify as an article
Oh, yeah, CONGRATS on TS.🎉
Beautiful, I loved this!!
Short, sweet, simply superb!!! Loved it!!! Congratulations too!!!💕❤️❤️
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Good job on Top Story!
This was such a great addition, Sonia, and ending it with a question was a perfect prompt!
Super cool haiku! Congrats on a top story!
Beautiful! I love how quickly you told a whole story. Loved this and congrats on the Top Story!
I loved your lines for this!! What a wonderful community collab it turned out to be all from Hannah's inspiring creativity :)
Beautiful and well done on Top Story for this, Sonia!
This is beautiful; it feels serene.
I love this beautiful addition to the story!
Thank you, another beautiful stanza - I will write a linking 7,7 and add it!