Transmountain Highway
The heart of Glacier
Going-to-the-Sun
I’m lost in nature’s beauty
Road to the heavens
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Dawn Salois
Mother of a wonderful son. Writing is a relatively new passion of mine. I love to create my own images. Self-published author of Shadow and Flame.
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Beautifully written.
"I'm lost in nature's beauty" - so beautiful!❤️
So lovely! I really like the "road to the heavens" part! Great job!
This is beautiful, Dawn. Love it.
A beautiful view! 💕
Great job
Love it! This was my first time writing a haiku as well
What a great first haiku! You really took the reader on the journey with you. Well done!
Great motion! With emotion. 🥰
I felt like I was making the ascent, beautiful!!
Loved those lines!
Awesome💕😊💖💕