Tiny Heavy Things
do you...?
do you ever think back to the days
when we were just guppy souls
swimming in a fishbowl,
minds tapping on curiosity glass
back when curfew was lightning bugs
and happiness was panting lungs
and burning muscles falling back breathless
against cool grass that told us it was time to
watch precipitation animals cloud dance
across the cerulean sky while we caught our breath?
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barefoot, splashing, do you remember baptizing
each other in the river before we cared about religion,
before believing in a god that we would
eventually lose faith in or cling desperately to like
Mama’s tweed jacket in a fast paced crowd?
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do you remember the first time someone
let you down?
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do you ever think back to being a stone whom
the river flowed around all wu wei sound
or drowned to sediment because even
mindfulness paid no mind to you?
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do you remember being a tiny, heavy thing
too?
About the Creator
R.C. Taylor
Part-time daydreamer. Full-time dork.
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Comments (12)
This is really nice, I loved it! Congrats.
Evocative writing! Brilliant work & congrats on your top story too! ☺️👏👏
Wow this was really impressive, great job!
Oh wowser. This is stunning. You have done a really very clever piece of artistic but also beautiful poetry, right here. Amazing and well-deserved of Top Story! Congrats!
Yes, I sooooo do!!! Truly grateful that you put this down in such emotive detailed descriptive word-wizardry. I will sincerely remember this poem for the rest of life and beyond 💓
Awesome poem, Taylor ! Congrats!!!💖
I just say wonderful poem. Keep sharing well content with us. Congrats on top story
That went through a range of emotions quickly and beautifully! Well done, and congratulations!
This is beautifully done and very deserving of Top Story.
Good gravy- this is just gorgeous. It swirled from carefree to that leaden let down. And I loved 'guppy souls"
Beautiful!
Whoaaaa, this was so stunning and relatable! Loved your poem!