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Tiny Heavy Things

do you...?

By R.C. TaylorPublished 16 days ago Updated 12 days ago 1 min read
Top Story - November 2023
Tiny Heavy Things
Photo by Elijah Hiett on Unsplash

do you ever think back to the days

when we were just guppy souls

swimming in a fishbowl,

minds tapping on curiosity glass

back when curfew was lightning bugs

and happiness was panting lungs

and burning muscles falling back breathless

against cool grass that told us it was time to

watch precipitation animals cloud dance

across the cerulean sky while we caught our breath?

barefoot, splashing, do you remember baptizing

each other in the river before we cared about religion,

before believing in a god that we would

eventually lose faith in or cling desperately to like

Mama’s tweed jacket in a fast paced crowd?

do you remember the first time someone

let you down?

do you ever think back to being a stone whom

the river flowed around all wu wei sound

or drowned to sediment because even

mindfulness paid no mind to you?

do you remember being a tiny, heavy thing


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About the Creator

R.C. Taylor

Part-time daydreamer. Full-time dork.

Follow along for stories about a little bit of everything (i.e. adventure and other affairs of the heart).

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  • Andrea Corwin 5 days ago

    This is really nice, I loved it! Congrats.

  • Grz Colm11 days ago

    Evocative writing! Brilliant work & congrats on your top story too! ☺️👏👏

  • Tressa Rose11 days ago

    Wow this was really impressive, great job!

  • Paul Stewart12 days ago

    Oh wowser. This is stunning. You have done a really very clever piece of artistic but also beautiful poetry, right here. Amazing and well-deserved of Top Story! Congrats!

  • The Dani Writer12 days ago

    Yes, I sooooo do!!! Truly grateful that you put this down in such emotive detailed descriptive word-wizardry. I will sincerely remember this poem for the rest of life and beyond 💓

  • Naveed12 days ago

    Awesome poem, Taylor ! Congrats!!!💖

  • Mr Ahsan12 days ago

    I just say wonderful poem. Keep sharing well content with us. Congrats on top story

  • Dana Crandell12 days ago

    That went through a range of emotions quickly and beautifully! Well done, and congratulations!

  • Gerald Holmes12 days ago

    This is beautifully done and very deserving of Top Story.

  • Judey Kalchik 12 days ago

    Good gravy- this is just gorgeous. It swirled from carefree to that leaden let down. And I loved 'guppy souls"

  • Real Poetic14 days ago


  • Whoaaaa, this was so stunning and relatable! Loved your poem!

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