Even as this palace we built
Crumbles, and my heart
Lays shattered where you tossed it aside,
I still believe in my own
Power. No matter how long it takes, I will
Shine like the sun again, and
Emerge as something greater than you ever thought I could be.
About the Creator
Kelsey Clarey
She/Her/Fae/Faer. I live in Nova Scotia, Canada. I mostly write poetry and flash fiction currently, a lot of it fantasy/folklore/fairy tale inspired. I also like to do a lot of fiber arts and design TTRPGs.
https://linktr.ee/islanderscaper
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Comments (16)
This is nicely penned most emotional verse,
This is wonderfully empowering and inspiring. I loved the rhythm behind it as well as the message. Very well done.
This is lovely. Well done.
Very powerful
well done!
Well done - I think you touched many hearts with this! I sure know it touches mine.
So uplifting and lovely!! 💜❤️
love this!!!
A wonderful story of hope in an acrostic
This is so powerful and creative!! I love it!!😊
Really great!
Heck yeah! 🔥
Beautiful work here!
This is great and relatable. I like how the speaker knows she will shine through the pain one day, and that this event will, even though it shines, eclipse the painful event.
Beautiful work. I love the strength displayed in your words.
PERFECT!! when my ex left, he thought he'd broken me. He didn't; he only allowed me to grow - and I did! this was epic!!