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The view from halfway down

This is a poem written for a fictional character in a netflix original called Bojack Horseman. The characters name who recited this poem is named Secretariat. Secretariat is a movie star who Bojack (main character and also an actor) idolized and considered a father figure. The poem is recited at a dinner party that essentially Bojack is hallucinating following a near fatal overdose. In a transitional limbo to the afterlife hosted by Bojacks dead friends and family, each person gives their “last show” as they cross over and throughout Bojack is increasingly desperate to cling to his life.

By g.m.t Published 2 years ago 1 min read
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“The weak breeze whispers nothing

The water screams sublime

His feet shift, teeter-totter

Deep breath, stand back, it’s time

Toes untouch the overpass

Soon he’s water bound

Eyes locked shut but peek to see

The view from halfway down

A little wind, a summer sun

A river rich and regal

A flood of fond endorphins

Brings a calm that knows no equal

You’re flying now

You see things much more clear than from the ground

It’s all okay, it would be

Were you not now halfway down

Thrash to break from gravity

What now could slow the drop

All I’d give for toes to touch

The safety back at top

But this is it, the deed is done

Silence drowns the sound

Before I leaped I should’ve seen

The view from halfway down

I really should’ve thought about

The view from halfway down

I wish I could’ve known about

The view from halfway down”

-Secretariat (Bojack Horseman s6e15)

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About the Creator

g.m.t

bare bones,

here are rests the things ive wrote,

to purge, to mend whats broke.

read, or dont. <3

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