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The Unaskable Question

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By Atomic HistorianPublished 7 months ago Updated 7 months ago 1 min read
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The Unaskable Question
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Sitting here

Wanting to ask an unaskable question

Oh the hesitation

What if it’s the answer I want

What if it’s the other

Will it haunt me

Just sitting here

Listening to her

Watching her

Watching how she takes care of something small

She’d make a great mother

I want to tell her

It’s practically screaming from my brain

My whole body quivering with the desire

The fire

To tell her how I feel about her

But is it reciprocated

Or would she hate it

If I let my words fly

I don’t want to let this one die

To shrivel up on the vine

I want her to know what’s on my mind

But I have to hold it in a little longer

The unaskable question

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Atomic Historian

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  • Mike Singleton - Mikeydred7 months ago

    Some thoughtful words

  • Oooo, I could actually feel the anxiety here! Loved your poem!

  • Tiffany Gordon 7 months ago

    Awesome work!

  • "To ask the unaskable question. To court, pure & chaste from afar. To dream, a reciprocal answer. To fear, that the answer is no." Why do I hear Don Quixote singing this while tilting at windmills? BTW, you expressed that internal struggle about as well as is possible. I certainly could identify with it.

  • Babs Iverson7 months ago

    Beautiful absolutely beautiful!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Alex H Mittelman 7 months ago

    Great poem! Good work! Loved it!

  • Nice ♥️📝👌

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