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The time loop

A day that never ends

By N.I.B.Published about a month ago 1 min read

Trapped in a cycle, I relive the same day
Stuck in a loop, with no escape, no way
To break the chain, to move forward in time
I'm stuck in this moment, forever confined

The same sunrise, the same sunset's glow
The same conversations, the same places to go
The same choices, the same mistakes to make
The same heartbreak, the same heart to break

I try to change course, to alter the fate
But the loop holds strong, it's a never-ending wait
For a chance to escape, to move on and be free
But the loop holds tight, a prisoner I'll be

In this never-ending cycle, I search for a way
To break the curse, to seize a new day
But until then, I'm trapped in this time loop's sway
Reliving the same day, night, and day.

sad poetry

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Comments (7)

  • Maryam29 days ago

    Nice 👍 one

  • Gstarzy30 days ago

    Trapped in a cycle...

  • Shamsainabout a month ago

    Indeed, it's a day that never ends

  • Shounerhabout a month ago

    Never give up

  • Salman Pakiabout a month ago

    Breaking free seems impossible.

  • Sweileh 888about a month ago

    Thank you I am happy with your exciting stories Watch my stories now

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