The Sea… How I Love Thee!
Paul's Unofficial Remix Challenge
I last
Saw the sea…
When?
Oh, quite recently…
When this year was still new…
Beyond sloping, silvery, satin sands
White horses astride undulating swells of cobalt blue.
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Its gentle murmur
Drew me irresistibly
Beneath circling seagulls screeching…
Past toddlers’ tinkling laughter.
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Patiently…
I scanned the horizon
Leapt onto foaming, salty breakers…
Courting near disaster…
Eyes stinging!
Ears ringing!
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Flying like a demented arrow
I revelled in exhilarating, turbulent waves
Free from troubles; worries; sorrow
Unshackled from their anchor …
No longer their slave.
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Tyrannical time loosed his grip
Refreshed, renewed, reinvigorated
I was young!
I was free!
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Adrenaline coursed through my veins
My heart skipped merrily
Just one more wave…
No, make that three!
That last one ended quite scarily.
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Sadly, time regained his grip
Reluctantly, I bade the sea
A forlorn farewell.
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When?
Oh when
Will my next encounter be?
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Beach holidays beckon cheerily
Soon… ever so soon…
I’ll return…
And all will be well for me!
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The above poem is written for Paul’s Remix Challenge and is a remix of Paul Stewart’s fabulous poem, When Did You Last See The Sea
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Clearly, I have a close connection to water and its soothing influence, as seen also in My Perfect Place.
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