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The Sandy Mountain

Tale of a barren land

By U.RdiyaPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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The Sandy Mountain
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The Sandy Mountain.

Squeezing water from the clouds

Left with barren lands

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Umrah Rdiya.

nature poetry
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U.Rdiya

Dreamer. Introverted Writer...

" I think I may boast myself to be, with all possible vanity, the most unlearned and uninformed female who ever dared to be an authoress."

Jane Austen .

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Eugenette Morinabout a year ago

    Well done... the dry un-drenched desert comes through very clearly

  • Dawn Saloisabout a year ago

    This one is so unique and very powerfully written. Excellent haiku!

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Wonderful imagery in this!! All three lines were really solid and made an impact. Great work!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Oh wow. This is so descriptive. That second line is amazing. Well done.

  • KJ Aartilaabout a year ago

    This is excellent! Nice job. :)

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Fantastic!!!

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