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The Sadness That I Feel, The Loss We've Made

In The Darkness of My Heart

By Sharp AimPublished 23 days ago 1 min read
The Sadness That I Feel, The Loss We've Made
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In the light of day, his shadow fades

A absence that my heart can't convey

His laughter echoes through my mind

A memory that I cannot unwind

The joy he brought, the love we shared

A treasure that I'll always bear

But now he's gone, and I am left

With only dreams of what we had

The shadow of his love, a ghostly presence

A longing that will never fade

In the darkness of my heart

His absence casts a lonely part

The sadness that I feel, the loss we've made

A void that cannot be filled, a price we've paid

sad poetry

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Comments (1)

  • Sherif Saad23 days ago

    Excellent work. This poem beautifully captures the profound sadness and longing that accompanies the loss of a loved one. The imagery of fading shadows and echoing laughter creates a poignant sense of absence, while the heartfelt expressions of cherished memories and the enduring void they leave behind are deeply moving. It's a touching tribute to love and loss, resonating with anyone who has experienced similar grief. Thank you for sharing this emotional and reflective piece.

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