The River
Weird dreams and not-quite nightmares
Cry in your sleep.
When the tears won't fall,
Won't catch the light, cry.
Let them nourish the ethereal
Lilies of the dead.
.
Look now at this river of petals,
This moon-white river of dead dreams
And rotten plans.
What a pretty sight they make,
The white lilies.
.
The sunflowers, crimson like sunset,
Bleed along the bank,
Staining the currents red
With the warm blood of what could have been.
Christ, what a sight.
.
It can't be a dream but...
It's too pretty for a nightmare.
Cool against the hand,
Cold in the eyes,
Freezing in the chest.
.
An ice dagger of certainty.
This is too cold for a dream.
But the moon shines, the petals gleam.
There is something about the reaching stamen and pistil
That screams nothing is as it seems.
.
The lilies are brighter now, insistent as they move
Downstream.
So cry now, cry in your sleep.
Feed this river,
This river of dead, decaying dreams.
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Silver Serpent Books
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Comments (3)
Theres something kind of barbaric and inevitable and can't tear the eyes awayish here.
I second D.K.'s observations. Wonderful writing, as always.
Very vivid and surreal! Like how you delved into an unsettling but not frightening dreamscape. Flow felt like a underlying chant with the sprinkling of rhyme