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Sharp

I'm tired and snippy.

By Silver Serpent BooksPublished about a month ago 1 min read
Sharp
Photo by Andrey Grinkevich on Unsplash

I am coarse, rough around the edges but not like sand.

Not in the way that it can feel soft, masquerade as something nice.

I am the jagged teeth of a smooth stone wall,

Catching flesh on a surprise brush and ripping it open,

Drawing blood.

.

Everything about me is rough in an obvious, dangerous way.

The way you see wood splintering along a handrail

Or a rusted pair of scissors, cast haphazardly on a bench.

The thin thorns on the rose, not big but willing to bite.

Willing to expose the soft insides of a hard outside.

.

I've become sharp,

Unblinkingly able to slice open the lies

And let uncomfortable truths stain the grass red.

The shame of it all, is that somewhere along the way

I cut myself open too, a rose bush strangled by its thorns.

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Comments (7)

  • Joe O’Connorabout a month ago

    I was intrigued by the image you chose, and the poem certainly lived up to it! The imagery you've created is almost tangible

  • D.K. Shepardabout a month ago

    Such rich imagery of roughness and pain. This last stanza really gave wings to the particulars

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    This was so dark, intense and relatable! Loved your poem!

  • Catsidheabout a month ago

    This hits home. Beautiful!

  • Christy Munsonabout a month ago

    I ate this up. The corrosive edges so honestly exposed feel like a memory or two, once removed. Brilliantly written and evocative!

  • D. J. Reddallabout a month ago

    It takes a certain softness, to confess to being sharp. Nicely done!

  • Margaret Brennanabout a month ago

    omg, I think you've crawled inside my brain and pulled out a few thoughts. LOVE this; it's so relatable.

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