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The Pheonix

TW: abuse references

By Daciana McCromaigPublished 4 years ago 1 min read
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The Pheonix

The highest crime of developed societies is to hurt a child

A pretty little girl with manners mild

Her spirit crushed by claws and shrill words

The voice of vocal swords

Spouting from one she she was supposed to trust

As she ages she realizes sink or swim she must

Her walls rise

Her mask falls into place the true self known to few allies

Slowly love of few breaks through

Their care teaches her some are true

Confidence and self-assurance develops Around her love envelops

The girl died that day

In the ashes a woman lay

Her life may shape her

But never again will her worth defer to the words of another

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Daciana McCromaig

I'm a freelance writer, editor, and soon to be published author. Exploring Vocal because it gives an outlet for my creativity that I don't necessarily get in my professional life.

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