The Path
The God Within: Poems by; Keith McHugh
Its Hard to conceive,
Changing what we believe.
So we can achieve,
Our inner most desire,
Hidden within our fire.
Its something we admire.
Fighting resistance,
In our daily existence.
It takes persistence.
T o go the distance.
So many walls,
Unending halls,
I trip and I fall,
flat on my face.
Rising to the Challenge,
opening the space.
A ll my thoughts race,
With cluttering embrace.
Some I wish i could Erase.
They're So hard to face,
The Bricks in their place,
Set by past mistakes.
Be true to oneself,
B believe in your worth,
While you traverse,
Your own personal Universe.
About the Creator
Keith Mchugh
Good day to the wonderful soul reading this. I'm so glad to be able to share my art with so many awesome people, with such great imaginations. I hope you enjoy my little contribution. See you in the station.
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