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The mess I’ve made

A dialogue poem

By Natasha CollazoPublished 6 days ago Updated 5 days ago 1 min read
The mess I’ve made
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Don’t do that, not yet.

It’s kind of too late, what’s done is done.

I know what to do.

But I don’t see that being done.

Of course you don’t, you only see what didn’t happen right now.

Im living right now.

But you won’t live to do right now forever.

I’m perplexed.

Let me do it.

What’s done cannot be undone.

What you you’ve done is the extent of what can be done.

What I’ve done, cannot stop doing.

inspirationalsurreal poetryStream of Consciousness

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Natasha Collazo

**Studying Modern Journalism @ NYU **

Student @ American Writers & Artists Institute

Project: The diary of an emo Latina

Content and freelance creator

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Comments (6)

  • Cody Dakota Wooten, C.B.C.5 days ago

    This is a really interesting piece, Natasha! You're capturing that tough spot between what is, what has, and what could be!

  • D.K. Shepard5 days ago

    Strong sense of tension in this and some intriguing wordplay!

  • Hannah Moore6 days ago

    The angst of knowing you've really done it now.

  • Some things that are done cannot be unseen, unheard or unfelt. Loved your poem so much!

  • angela hepworth6 days ago

    Powerful work, a very pained, realistic depiction here!

  • Lana V Lynx6 days ago

    Relationships can be messy. Well done, Natasha!

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