If you were to travel deep in your mind
Searching for truth, what would you find?
For the meaning of life we're all on the search.
Some look to science, some go to church.
Yet, still we are blind to how we're designed.
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>That was a bad idea. I thought you knew… >Oh, the pathos! I don’t really know you as well as I should. In fact, I may not know the real you at all. That essential, sparkling you that you only reveal to a select few. Had I been paying more attention to the stories you are so fond of telling, in which you are invariably author, narrator and protagonist, I would not have been so foolish as to set you up on a blind date. After all, no friend has ever done anything of the kind for another. That’s preposterous. What is a friend, really?
By D. J. Reddall6 days ago in Fiction
Comments (13)
Very nice.
This was very deep and thought provoking! It was fantastic!
Thank you for sharing ❤️Nice meaningful piece❗
It is ludicrous for anyone to believe they have these answers! Great limerick!
I liked how you kept that simple but achieved careful thought still. For a limerick it's very haiku-like.
This was a great read! You chose your words so methodically and really took care to the message you wanted to convey! Stunning!
Love the truth in this! Very good
Love this!!! So much truth! Always look deeper 💫
That was deep 👍😍
Isn't it great to look at the universe and know that there is so much more. I want to know so much more. I adore this poem. Just wonderful. So much truth.
Wonderful work!
You hit the nail right on the head, beautifully done.
I love this one