I stand before the crowd with a smile so bright,
Hiding the pain and the fear that I fight,
The perfect mask I wear, never to crack,
But behind it lies a soul that's under attack.
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The world sees me as flawless, beyond compare,
But they don't know the struggles that I bear,
The weight of their expectations is so high,
That I'm afraid to let them see me cry.
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So I put on a show, a performance so grand,
And I hope they don't see the sweat on my hands,
But the truth is I'm human, with flaws and all,
And the mask I wear is starting to fall.
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I long for the day when I can be free,
To be myself, and just simply be,
No more hiding, no more disguise,
Just living life with truth in my eyes.
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So if you see me struggling, don't look away,
Reach out your hand and help me find my way,
For the mask I wear is heavy and it's tough,
And I need someone to help me take it off.
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About the Creator
Allan M
Aspiring creative writer with a passion for storytelling. Always eager to learn and grow, seeking opportunities to develop my skills and gain experience in the field.
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Great take on the challenge! I love the feel and flow of your words!
Nice one! Can you please check my posts as well and let me know if you like them? I am a new writer and the following are my posts. https://vocal.media/poets/blue-moon-ka77gr01qz https://vocal.media/horror/strange-land-part-1