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The little train

And a journey up Snowdon

By Luke FosterPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
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Choo choo, goes the train

Almost to the summit, so

Even Nanna can go.

nature poetrychildrens poetry

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Luke Foster

Father. New husband. Wannabe writer.

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  • Caroline Jane4 months ago

    So cute. ❤️

  • Babs Iverson4 months ago

    Adorable!!! 💖💖💖💕

  • sleepy drafts4 months ago

    Oh, I love this! This poem is so sweet and personal. Wonderful❤️

  • Cathy holmes4 months ago

    Very nicely done.

  • Morgana Miller4 months ago

    Oh this is so touching! And tugs at some of my own memories. Really well done.

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