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First breath under Sun
Nurturing rain, winds of time
In earths womb seeds wait
I wanted to express the journey of a tree, similar to that of we humans. In the grand scheme of things it is brief, so lets make the most of it.
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About the Creator
JBaz
I have enjoyed writing for most of my life, never professionally.
I wish to now share my stories with others, lets see where it goes.
Born and raised on the Canadian Prairies, I currently reside on the West Coast. I call both places home.
Comments (8)
Wonderfully written, well done!
I loved how you worked all the elements in there, this was expertly done and felt so powerful and real! Great job!
Wonderful haiku. Well done.
Fabulous!!! Loving it!!!❤️❤️💕
So filled with possibilities.
An outstanding entry, Jason, and a perfect stand-alone haiku without considering the challenge!
Wowser, Jason. Well done on this. Love your use of brevity to describe the lifecycle of trees. I'm a huge fan of trees, so this was great!
Wonderful, Jason 🙂