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The Island

A High-Ku Haiku

By Natasja RosePublished 4 years ago • 1 min read
The Island
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The Island recalls

Before it was a mountain

It had been lava.

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The Volcano will also argue that the smoke it generates also counts as a gaseous state of being, take that, water! The Ocean looks smug and does not deign to reply...

Note for people struggling with the haiku count: Using apostrophes to cut out syllables might make you sound like Shakespeare, and possibly more than a little pretentious, but it's a valid and legitimate cheat.

Also, counting out on your fingers helps a lot.

(Particularly long note in order to hit the 100 minimum for poems)

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Natasja Rose

I've been writing since I learned how, but those have been lost and will never see daylight (I hope).

I'm an Indie Author, with 30+ books published.

I live in Sydney, Australia

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