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“I love you.” He wept.
She faded into the dark.
Years gone by like wind.
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In The Blink of Her Eye
Time itself bent and morphed, allowing Shannon the precious seconds needed to see and adjust to the disaster unfolding in front of her. Each frame showed minute details she would have missed had the clock not slowed down until she heard every click of the hands as they swept toward the end of everything. If only she was being melodramatic...
By Lisa VanGalen3 days ago in Fiction
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Wow, beautiful and wrenching.
Great Haiku. You capture the pain of loss through elements so well. So heartfelt.