Poets logo

The Higher You Rise

You become a piñata for haters

By Pam ReederPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
3
The Higher You Rise
Photo by Wyron A on Unsplash

Why is it that people can't be happy for you?

It seems that the higher you rise

You become a piñata for haters.

Instead of being happy for you

They want to be cruel and cutting

Minimize your accomplishments

Steal your joy.

But why?

Why is jealousy and envy such a natural reaction

from people that should be happy for you?

People that should celebrate your success with you

Instead trash talk behind your back.

They move into other circles and ghost you

But why?

Does your success remind them of their failures?

Does it remind them of opportunities missed?

Does it make them ashamed that they have squandered their time?

And rather than face their shortcomings and fix their problems,

they just target you with their pent-up venom.

Because the higher you rise,

puts you on the skyline

and then you become a piñata for haters.

***************

My poetry is emotions put to paper. It is rough, raw, and sometimes poorly written. That's ok though because it is of me, by me, for me. But I share it because I'm certain that out there somewhere is someone else with festering pain that might find some small solace in my rough and tumble efforts. And at that moment, we will be kindred spirits, even if only fleetingly.

performance poetry
3

About the Creator

Pam Reeder

Stifled wordsmith re-embracing my creativity. I like to write stories that tap into raw human emotions.

Author of "Bristow Spirits on Route 66", magazine articles, four books under a pen name, technical writing, stories for my grandkids.

Reader insights

Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

Top insights

  1. Expert insights and opinions

    Arguments were carefully researched and presented

  2. Eye opening

    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

  3. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  2. On-point and relevant

    Writing reflected the title & theme

Add your insights

Comments (2)

Sign in to comment
  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    Omggg, tell me about it! These people are everywhere. And they would make us feel bad for having accomplished something or feel guilty for being more successful than them. I just don't know what's the deal with these kinda people. They just suck the life out of us!

  • Heather Hubler2 years ago

    Ah, the haters...there are always going to be some. Sad but true. I guess just as they choose to hate, we can choose to love and rise above. Wonderfully written. Felt this one :)

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

© 2024 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.