"Chief Mountain" public domain photo, National Park Service.
About the Creator
Dawn Salois
Mother of a wonderful son. Writing is a relatively new passion of mine. I love to create my own images. Self-published author of Shadow and Flame.
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Comments (15)
Insightful 🥰
Monumental. 🥰❤️
How beautiful ❤️❤️🥰
Wow. Beautiful! And I love the video and the impact with it! <3
Wow, those three lines were packed with emotion. I loved the video you added. Excellent work :)
Beautiful poem, and mountain! The juxtaposition of the mountain as a birthplace and burial site is deeply moving.
Oh this is so beautiful. I love reading about your heritage Dawn.
So glad you shared this. A wonderful poem and lesson. Well done!
Very nice job on this one.
Ooooh, beautiful job! I was trying to figure out the pronunciation of Nínaiistáko. The ai dipthong is so settle, yet just enough for a syllable count! Truly lovely. Great work; I enjoyed the informative video!!
Magnificent!!! Love it!!! 💕😊💖💕
Very nice. Love the full story
Excellent take on the challenge with an extra historical insight
This was great. The added history gives this so much more feeling. Thank you for sharing!
Very beautifully written Haiku. And the video was very informative!