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The gift is lost

… when nothing's trimmed with jollity.

By Tim GracePublished 2 months ago 1 min read
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In the absence of required kit

we fear ourselves unready.

We lament the missing part of it

and hold ourselves unsteady.

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We see ourselves as incomplete

and as such we so behave.

We cast ourselves as counterfeit,

as fraud or worthless knave.

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We dwell upon our weaknesses,

our deficits and flaws.

We worry over pittances

and under count our scores.

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When need is an all consuming quality

the gift is lost; ‘nothing's trimmed with jollity’.

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© Tim Grace, 2011 (WS-Sonnet 66: line 3)

(Revised: 7 November 2022)

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Tim Grace

A first impression has a lasting effect - it makes a notable difference. In a subtle way that’s who I am as a poet. A ‘first impression’ looking for the gentle ‘twist’ that draws attention to a novel observation.

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