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The Gallop

2020 PAD Challenge: Day 11

By Christina PerryPublished 4 years ago 1 min read
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From Robert Lee Brewer's blog, Poetic Asides, "For today's prompt, write a control poem."

The Gallop

I always like a sonnet’s formal flow

to feel as light and effortless as this:

Crescendo, then retreat, as tides must go

with gentle rhyme and rhythm you nearly miss.

Like stallions on the plains, the words fly by!

So unencumbered from all worldly strife

one hardly sees where reins or halters lie.

Iambic meter lends the poem its life!

But, how can freedom fit within control?

Does one not force exclusion of the other,

since virtues of cohesion must extol

beyond a rigid frame and ocean’s wuther?

Without control, there is no freedom found.

These words, still true, the other way around.

surreal poetry
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About the Creator

Christina Perry

Christina is a traveler, a dreamer and a poet. Her writing is often influened by her work as a speech-language pathologist in Northern Manitoba with First Nations peoples.

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