Dad spat at their feet.
Mom turned away. Grandma said,
"...blue matches your eyes."
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Dane BH
By day, I'm a cog in the nonprofit machine, and poet. By night, I'm a creature of the internet. My soul is a grumpy cat who'd rather be sleeping.
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Outstanding
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Comments (4)
A whole story in 17 syllables. Nicely done. 👍
Very cool
Grandma is awesome!!! Fabulous poem!!!
Ah fantastic! Love it! Grandma knows best! 💙